On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is really good with lots of details and adjectives. To improve my writing next time I will put some little stores in my writing.
Tuesday, June 1, 2010
My Fishing Story Reflection
On Monday 3rd May the Minstrel came to Riverdale School. He taught us all about fishing. In class we wrote a story on a fishing experience. We are learning to be interesting writers by using lots of adjectives and details. We have learnt to get straight into the action. I think my story is really good with lots of details and adjectives. To improve my writing next time I will put some little stores in my writing.
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What do you mean by "next time I will put some little stores in my writing"? This is a good piece with interesting details and a beginning that captures the readers attention.
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