Salmas efilio: Magic Show

Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Magic Show

This is my Magic Show story. The thing that I did well is I made really inter interesting. The next thing that I need to work on is to included voice by describing how the person felt.

This is my Magic Show story.

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Greetings earthling! My name Salma Abdalla. I am 8 years old. I live in the city, Palmerston North. Palmerston North is above Wellington in the North Island of New Zealand. Palmerston North has a population of 80,000 people.

My school is Riverdale School. There is 300 or more people at this school. My favourite thing at school is jump jam. Jump jam is where you jump and dance to the music. The person that leads it is Mrs Walker. I am in LC10, that stands for Learning Centre 10. My classroom is the newest in the school. My teacher is Mrs Tamatea. My favourite sports are netball, basketball and soccer. My friends are Ellie, Brooke, Mackenzie, Alyssa, Annaleise, Georgia M., maddi,Payton, Grace, Luca, Georgia A, Ana and Alice.

I have four people in my family, Suliman is five years old, Mustafa is seven months old, and Mum and Dad. My dad is a vet. My little brother, Mustafa, is a big screamer and he is noisy when we watch television.

My favourite foods are fish and chips. My thing that I own is an ipod. If you don't know what an ipod is, it is an electronic thing that has games and music, it fits into your pocket so you can listen to music anywhere. My favourite show on T.V. is the Erin Simpson Show.

Salmas efilio

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Wednesday, September 22, 2010

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